Vibrations resulting from The Command’s presence at the farmhouse were getting stronger but before the neighbours could notice anything, Evelyn used her superpower – She started singing to make everyone fall asleep.
Vicious evil power, The Command, had taken the form of a large box-shaped bubble and was floating right above Keith who was deep asleep thanks to Evelyn; it clearly intended to trap Keith and carry him away.
Various attempts by Dev to make the bubble change its shape or size failed and after every attempt, Holly got into his head, travelled a few minutes into his past and made him try something else; this way, no time was practically wasted.
Viewing everything closely and waiting for the bubble to get small so that he could swallow it, Tim noticed Quincy’s shadow, the current host for The Command, on the wall and got an idea.
“Voice, The Voice, are you around?” he cried.
Vigilant, as always, The Voice confirmed his presence and asked how he could help.
“Virtually everything has been tried here but nothing is working because the shadow is still here. What if, while A Minute is time travelling with Quincy to all her happy memories, she picks the ones in which there is barely any light to cast her shadow? You know like at nights when she sang lullabies to Keith with the lights off or some other happy time when a shadow was not possible. Can you convey this message to A Minute? Maybe we can defeat The Command when the shadow disappears from here!”
“Very brilliant idea, on my way,” The Voice was heard exclaiming after which they couldn’t hear him as he possibly left to find A Minute.
Valiant One Minuters continued trying in vain and suddenly the box-shaped bubble opened its lid and started lifting Keith to lock him inside; it had grown stronger as it sensed them being worried and weak.
The story continues tomorrow in the next post. Did you notice that I managed to start each sentence (paragraph in case of long conversations) of this chapter of the story with the letter V (I have managed to do the same from the B letter post)! This is my 22nd post for this year’s A to Z Challenge (#atozchallenge). Head to my previous posts to read the entire story.
Read all my posts for the challenge in the A to Z links below:
A ➡ B ➡ C ➡ D ➡ E ➡ F ➡ G ➡ H ➡ I ➡ J ➡ K ➡ L ➡ M ➡ N ➡ O ➡ P ➡ Q ➡ R ➡ S ➡ T ➡ U ➡ V ➡ W ➡ X ➡Y ➡ Z
That’s actually a very smart idea to only go through memories where there wasn’t any light to create shadows. I like how you have thought this one through, I can see the gears churning in your head! On to the next, I hope they can extricate Keith in time.
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The box opening to swallow Keith ..that’s bad. I hope A minute would succeed in its mission and command would be weakened!
Dropping by from a to z “The Pensive”
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Hey thanks for ‘weakened’! Just writing the W chapter and needed a word like that!
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That was pretty amazing the way you started every sentence/thought with the letter of the day. Only hoping they get themselves together before the bubble swallows Keith.
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Thank you Kristin. I still haven’t figured it out myself. I intend to write in a few hours. Both I and my daughter have taken sick!
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Ohhh, I’m so sorry! Don’t overdo. Rest and get well soon.
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Thank you so much❤❤
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This is killing me now, the suspense I mean. Please post the W XYZ soon Anu. Can’t wait anymore.
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Ah thank you Swati. Oh W for wisdom tooth got extracted last night so I am a little delayed in thinking and writing. Will post soon!
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Oh! I hope you are fine now. You already are so wise, don’t worry the loss of a wisdom tooth will not spell the loss of wisdom. I didn’t have it in the first place. LOL.
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